1. Common Erotic Mistakes


    Date: 2/2/2016, Categories: Information, Author: Falconero, Rating: 91.9, Source: sexstories.com

    Punctuation Most notably, quotes 1. Using . . . Ellipses . . . Every time . . . A character . . . Speaks . . . Or . . . Performs ... An action . . . There's no reason for it. You aren't William Shatner, and nobody talks like this in every day conversation. Also, the frequent pauses just makes me imagine all the characters are William Shatner (old, not while on Star Trek) and nobody really wants to think about him fucking himself. Ellipses are used when words are omitted from quotes, or when the speaker trails off without really concluding the sentence. So there's no reason for the narration to have any of them, especially in third person. 2. Let's get excited!!! You know what I mean???!! I'm genuinely having a good time writing this story!!!!!!!!! Rarely, if ever, use more than one exclamation point or question mark at the end of a sentence. One is enough. I've seen stories where the author has used exclamation marks after every sentence, even when narrating a calm scene. A concession could be made that you want to represent a character as yelling so a person in another room can hear them and you just plain don't want to do all caps to get that point across. There's also the mix of the combination for question marks and exclamation points. There's no set rule, so it doesn't really matter what order. Though it could be said, that question mark first is best if the sentence is more of a question: "Where is this place?!" While exclamation point first is best to express outrage ...
    or anger: "Just who the hell do you think you are!?" 3. "Oh baby you're fucking me so hard?!" Yes, putting question marks at the end of sentences that aren't even questions is more common than you think, but not as common as some of these. Still happens though. Like the example sentence, I doubt most people have sex so good that they literally don't know how hard they are getting fucked. Then again, could be the sex is so boring that sarcasm is necessary, but by then you drop the exclamation point probably. 4. "That sounds like fun"! "What are you talking about"? "I just told you", she said with a sneer. Punctuation marks never, ever, ever belong outside of the quotation marks, because the dialogue is within them, so why the hell wouldn't the punctuation for them be as well? Suspension of Disbelief These are good in satire or for the occasional read when you just don't care. Fiction is fiction, but as you all know, there gets to a point where people have to call bullshit because they just can't stretch their belief long enough to enjoy the story anymore. Hell, a lot of people get excited because the protagonists are really relatable in a lot of ways. But in these stories? Not so much. 1. Where the hell are you getting all of these things? Often times stories have things that are ridiculously improbable. Apparently, every young teenager can afford multiple hidden cameras for blackmail purposes that no one can ever find unless they know exactly where they are. Another one is ...
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